Welcome to this earth

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A new leaf will be born

to cherish the old tree

A new day will be dawned

to wipe our tears

A new hope will be come

to lift us from the pits

Anew light will come

to show the glory of life

A new call will come

to change this trend to a new

A new voice will be heared

togive an end to our worries

These will happen to this earth

from the dawn of new year

We welcome it to this earth

to overcome all our grivies

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

— SAKTHEEE2007, Dec 30, 2007

Critiques

Mark

18 years 5 months ago

Sakthi we can do more than hope right?

We can each in our own way do something to try and make this hope more of a reality. Aside from a few typos this is a rather nice message of hope Sakthi. Keep on writing and here is the help with the typos. to give an end all our grieves Fix those two typos Sakthi and this poem will be very nice :) Mark

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