Be with love

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It is the need of this hour

to change this world of violence

This dreary desert has to be changed

to our kids and to our generations

Purify the air from the dust of

sulphor and phosperous

The sounds of guns and bombs

has to be changed with chantings on love

The hatreds and racial clashes has to be

turned as rallies of universal integration

God can't come

at every one'scall to this earth

Love will come and heal your wounds and

it alone can rescue from it's hands

Change your prayers and God too

It only the rescuer and saviour of all souls

Take oath to have and spread love

on all souls and lives of this land

Preserve this world as pure to our kids and

to preserve their glee with love

SAKTHIRAVICHANDRAN

— SAKTHEEE2007, Dec 31, 2007

Critiques

purplemoondoll

18 years 5 months ago

Love Heals and Conquers

so many things. I really enjoyed reading this. The sounds of guns and bombs has to be changed with chantings on love The hatreds and racial clashes has to be turned as rallies of universal integration I couldn't agree more. It's a shame there are some in the world that cannot see that. Nice work. :-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

weirdelf

18 years 5 months ago

Sakkthee, this is powerful, beautiful and brave.

I applaude you and will try to live by your example. Poetry can cause change. The line "Change your prayers and God too" is especially potent. We all need to examine ourselves and our beliefs. I also note that your English has improved immensely. cheers, Jess

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