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PAS DE DEUX

 

Transatlantic songs:

like up-close dirty dancing

- electricity arcs.

 

 

 

— meic, Jan 05, 2008

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meic

18 years 5 months ago

HAIKU

Definition of Haiku 1) an unrhymed Japanese poem recording the essence of a moment. Nature is combined with human nature. It usually consists of three lines of 5/7/5 (5 kana in the 1st line, 7 kana in the 2nd line, and 5 kana in the 3rd line) totalling seventeen kana. 2) A foreign adaptation of 1, usually written in 3 lines totalling 17 syllables or LESS. As you will notice, there are two definitions. Definition #1 is where many get confused. People tend to confuse kana or a single unit in the Japanese language with the English syllable. This is like comparing apples to oranges. Kana cannot be compared to syllables. Unless you are Japanese, have been writing Japanese, or speak fluent Japanese, you will be writing definition #2. The difference between the two is that in definition #2, you will be writing 3 LINES OF POETRY, 17 SYLLABLES OR LESS. .................................. Thus I write short three-line poems based very loosely on the form - since I don't even stick to definition #2 - and call them freeform! Mike
theladyblue

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

hmmmm *smirk & evil eye*

well I will not tell where my mind drifted to...but I will extend a giggle anyway! *wink* Nicely done Mike! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
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meic

18 years 5 months ago

Ah but I have a genuine

Ah but I have a genuine Turkish talisman of 'The Eye' [though doubtless less effective than yours] ... and smirks and giggles are a delight! double *wink* Mike

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