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When Failure?/When Success?

 

When Failure?/When Success?

 

There is the greatest practical benefit

in making a few failures early in life.

                                                         ---T.H. Huxley

 

How far high failure overleaps

the bounds of low success.

                                                   ---Sir Lewis Morris

 

How can they say my life isn't a success?

Have I not for more than sixty years got

enough to eat and escaped being eaten?

                                             ---Logan Pearsall Smith

 

A failure, loser/

Then breakout

 

To success, perhaps

A star:

 

So bloomin' fine

That smudgy line

 

That roughly slopes

Between,

 

And blurry, not clear cut

(At times so hard to see),

 

Quite as she ought

Indeed to seem ....

 

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A star, success/

Then failure,

 

Sadly battered loser:

 

And too awfully fine

That smudgy line

 

That roughly slants

Between,

 

And muddled, not clear cut,

A blotted oozer

 

(At times so friggin'

Tough to see,

 

It then would seem

To earmarked me),

 

Quite as she ought

Appear, as verging seam

 

As in some dismal dream ....

 

— barbsdad2003, Jan 23, 2008

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Michael Landau

18 years 4 months ago

A good question

How do you tell the difference between failure and success? Definitely one of the great struggles in my life. Michael
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barbsdad2003

18 years 4 months ago

Thank You ...

When I'd finished this write, thought perhaps it'd be a mite obscure. Was hoping folks here wouldn't struggle with that obscurity. You nailed this right on the money. Exactly my underlying (underflying?) question. Understanding can be the greatest compliment/gift. Your comment therefore warms my heart. Thanx much. Yours, Chuck PS: It also occurs to me: One person's failure can be another's success ... and vice versa. Perspective, that is, can claim the picture ... and its look/meaning.

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