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Jan 23, 2008
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Dead Silence
Thes air is cold,
This world is dead,
Beautiful roses,
Adorned with thorns,
So beautiful to look at,
So painful to the touch,
‘Tis the tale of everything,
In a world,
Wrapped up,
In a desolate,
Dead silence
The sky is black,
The tress are bare,
And these dead children,
Aren’t going anywhere,
They’ll just lie here frozen,
Waiting for someone to release them,
From this world of desolate,
Dead silence
Her heart is cold,
And his is broken,
Her glass is empty,
His glass full,
But in this world,
This dead, dry land,
No glass exists,
There is nothing to be filled,
Yet no one cares; they’re all dead,
And wrapped in a blanket,
Of misery and sadness,
In this world of desolate,
Dead silence.
— Gentle Storm, Jan 23, 2008
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 4 months ago
Dead Silence fits this I hear it in every stanza
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
Not a sound
purplemoondoll
18 years 4 months ago
The noise
Candlewitch
18 years 3 months ago
Hello,
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