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Why’d You Leave Me?

 

 

Daddy, love

This mark you’ve left upon my heart,

It’s more than just in open wound,

It’s gushing blood,

And I feel doomed,

Doomed to die slowly, painfully,

All the way internally

 

Daddy dear,

Why'd you leave me?

I’m not grown up,

I’m just a kid,

Not even thirteen,

Just considered a “tween”

 

Daddy,

It’s almost been two years,

And for you I’ve shed,

 

Daddy,

I know it’s not your fault,

You didn’t mean to leave,

Daddy, please don’t feel guilty

For just abandoning me,

I know you had no say in this,

It was just your time to go,

 

But daddy,

Still--

You died and left me here,

The blood pouring from me-

In an endless flow

— Gentle Storm, Jan 25, 2008

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Country/Region: Michigan/USA

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themoonman

themoonman

18 years 3 months ago

Hi Gentle Storm...

Anger is a perfectly fine emotion..and writing is a great outlet... thank you for sharing this part of your life.

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