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THE WIND DAY

 

This day in winter the wind sang and sang and sang my children to nap my cat to recline the post man to hurry hiding from the chilly song snow to dance hot milk to heat and warm covers to wrap this day in winter the wind sang and we all danced
— frangipangi, Jan 25, 2008

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frangipangi

18 years 4 months ago

cup of cocoa

thank you Ronda. a cozy memory on a cold snowy day, with a cup of cocoa (laced with a snort of brandy!. complete with afghans and afternoon naps! Yours, Frangipangi
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 4 months ago

quirk

for some reason it posted my comment twice ... must have been a hiccup! ~ Ronda

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