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Jan 25, 2008
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THE WIND DAY
This day in winter the wind sang and sang and sang my children to nap my cat to recline the post man to hurry hiding from the chilly song snow to dance hot milk to heat and warm covers to wrap this day in winter the wind sang and we all danced
— frangipangi, Jan 25, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
Like a warm cup of cocoa
frangipangi
18 years 4 months ago
cup of cocoa
RSScheerer
18 years 4 months ago
quirk
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
and we all danced
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