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frangipangi
Jan 28, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

haiku

babies watching me

with breath held in wonderment

I behold them too

— frangipangi, Jan 28, 2008
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frangipangi

18 years 4 months ago

Oomph it shall be!

Thanks Jess for the specifics. Two eyes,hearts,brains are oft more insightful. Will revise. Yours, Frangipangi

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