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To Surrender

Her lips full and tender.

Her eyes glaze with passion.

And she surrenders.

 

His caresses turn possessive.

He takes of her deep and fiercely.

Her knees tremble with extacy.

 

She surrenders her body to him.

He takes what she willingly gives.

A love long denied.

 

They quench their thirst for each other.

But only for this moment.

 

For a thirst like this one,

Is never quenched for long.

— Calliope, Jan 28, 2008

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Region, Country: New York, USA

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professor

professor

18 years 4 months ago

Wake up

Great read to wake up with Lacy....or at any other time to be honest.lol. This one positively oozes sensuality. Keith

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