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Ancientone
Jan 30, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A Cock and a Pussy (A Quatrain)

 

A Cock and a Pussy

 

A cock and a pussy went to town,

on the way pussy wore a frown,

cock boasted of his love so true,

pussy smiled, while this cock she blew.

 

A cock and a pussy went to town,

on the way pussy did lie down,

cock loosed his sword quick,

pussy spread for cock's prick.

 

A cock and a pussy went to town,

on the way pussy's belly was down,

cock seeded the pussy to bestow,

pussy's belly began hanging low.

 

A cock and a pussy went to town,

on the way home pussy wore a frown,

cock ran away, leaving pussy alone,

pussy cried for love, trip blown!

 

A cock and a pussy went to town,

on the way pussy wore a frown,

cock boasted of his love so true,

pussy broke the sword, cock turned blue!

— Ancientone, Jan 30, 2008
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asiajy

asiajy

18 years 4 months ago

cock and pussy

I thought it was hilarious. I read it to a friend and they cracked up. Your language use completely fit the story. At first I thought the end was turning emotional, but I'm glad you went humor.
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Ancientone

18 years 4 months ago

Glad you both...

got a laugh or two, it was fun to write, but the last verse added just had to be there. ;) Patrick/AO
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cricket

18 years 4 months ago

Now that was good

Patrick.. You have out done yourself.. this was Awesome.. At first I was like omg.. Then I had to giggle.. You sure can write my friend.. absolutely brilliant... BrownEyesBlue
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Ancientone

18 years 4 months ago

OKKKK!

Glad you enjoyed it Cricket! :) Patrick/AO

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