Waiting (Haiku)

flotilla in sun

sitting silently harbored;

much too long waiting.

— barbsdad2003, Feb 13, 2008

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Country/Region: USA

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dbaker

18 years 3 months ago

brilliant

Chuck, In three simple lines you captured a moment. I sometimes forget that less oftentimes has a bigger impact than more. Remind me someday to send you my piece about a storm I survived on I-40 last summer. Cheers mate! -DS Baker

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