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There's No Excuse, None At All
If you’re angry and unloved
If your heart hurts like heck,
Well here’s a little story,
(You twisted messed-up reject,)
On how to make your family love you,
And make them see,
(And make you see)
That you love them too
There’s no excuse,
None at all,
Stop pushing them down,
Stop making them fall,
There’s no excuse,
None at all,
Don’t hit them,
Don’t smack them,
Don’t curse or yell,
Don’t you see?!
You’re making their lives HELL
There’s no excuse,
None at all,
Stop pushing them down,
Stop making them fall,
There’s no excuse,
None at all,
You can’t undo the past,
So here’s a little tip,
Get down on your knees,
Beg for forgiveness
Make them a special promise
There’s no excuse,
None at all,
Stop pushing them down,
Stop making them fall,
There’s no excuse,
None at all,
No more hitting,
No more hurting,
Just caring,
Just loving,
There’s no excuse,
None at all,
Stop pushing them down,
Stop making them fall,
There’s no excuse,
None at all,
They’re staying with you,
They’re still trying to love you,
So stop putting them down,
And stop picking them up,
Just so you can throw them around
There’s no excuse,
None at all,
Stop pushing them down,
Stop making them fall,
There’s no excuse,
None at all
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poewriter58
18 years 3 months ago
Abuse
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