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What is this?
What happened?
Have I became happy?
Do you know what this is?
I'm so bewildered!
Strange things flow through me
Thoughts of you and I
What have I become?
What is this?
This has become a reality
Submerged under emotions
Smile not so normal for me
Up way to late with thoughts of you
Wicked emotions leave my carcass
My hate has left me standing
What is to fill me now?
What does this mean?
Run your fingers over my brain
Touch my soul with your ruff hands
Squeeze my bones with your gentle touch
Taste me inside and out
Stamp your claim on my heart
Hold my head under water
Breathe your life back into me
Wrap me in your limbs
Lay me to rest within your heart
Time will tell if your true-life
Leave me undisturbed in my cocoon
Break me loose with acts of love
Till that day I lay and rest
Unbothered and untouched
For you I love
For you I wait
Set me free and I'll be yours
Critiques
Fuss22
18 years 3 months ago
This is so amazing=) You
rwc88...
18 years 3 months ago
what is this
Tragic_Bliss
18 years 3 months ago
hero
RandomThoughts
18 years 3 months ago
Thankx
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