Sniper

Whether you intended it or not, the simple, almost blank verse that you chose here fit the subject matter. You captured the coldness necessary for the mind of a sniper. Notes: "Tigger" is "Trigger" "snipers" should be possessive "sniper's" ~ Ronda

Excellent write for the subject matter~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

...that your "sniper", left me a tad bit, cold. I imagine that the life of a sniper HAS to be more complex than the style you have used, would suggest. I can't see it being so "simple". Having said that about the theme, I will say that it flowed nicely, enough.....for someone playing a "sniper video game". Just one opinion, take care... #{:>{)}]@=== docmaverick.