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Tragic_Bliss
Feb 20, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Pain...

Pain so deep I feel it inside, sometimes I want to turn and hide

Hatred for you and love for another, dear lord repent my sins and forgive what I did to others

Your so close yet so far away

Pain is my motivation , I wonder if I should stay

Long hours, deep thoughts, all of those bullets I should have caught

For I have no right to love, for only the man knows who lives above

— Tragic_Bliss, Feb 20, 2008

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Country/Region: Idaho

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DarkinAZ

18 years 3 months ago

I like your work!

it's like a piece of me I have yet to pen.....
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poewriter58

18 years 3 months ago

once again

Your words are written from what is inside of you , everyone has a right to love ,no matter what your past find your pride and self respect and you will find love there is always good in everyone sometimes you have to dig deeper in some to find it but it is there you have taken the first step by writing out your feelings Chrys
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 3 months ago

Pain

Once again, this seems like one of those pieces that was cathartic to you when it was written. That is all that is important here. ~ Ronda

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