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Feb 22, 2008
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Marshall lake
As I saw you and I saw that smile,
It seemed like I knew u for more than awhile.
Whether you saw me as a friend or was hattin on me,
I thought you were beautiful such a sight to see.
Those brief moments of silence,
I didn't care as long as you were with me.
I could have stood in the water with you all day, to bad your parents said you could not stay.
I may see really into you and I barely know you but I'm single what can I say,
I'll see you soon, hopefully once again in the same spot, maybe one day will be more than friends.
— Tragic_Bliss, Feb 22, 2008
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poewriter58
18 years 3 months ago
hattin(?) could have not
RSScheerer
18 years 3 months ago
Marshall Lake
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