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Feb 22, 2008
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Killing 101
cold, angry and excited as can be,
i hold my rifle and my trusty m16.
death is near and i feel it,
nothing in the world will ever heal it.
target in sight,
soon he will be dead,
catching my bullet with his head.
i squeeze the trigger,
now he's dead.
i see the pink mist confirm.
i crawl away and head toward the bird.
i will never forget about this,
knowing his kid he will never kiss,
this job is hard you have to be bold,
takings someones life you feel so cold
— Tragic_Bliss, Feb 22, 2008
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poewriter58
18 years 3 months ago
I don't
RSScheerer
18 years 3 months ago
Killing 101
RSScheerer
18 years 3 months ago
just that simple change
themoonman
18 years 3 months ago
Mr Magic...
Tragic_Bliss
18 years 3 months ago
rifle/m16
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