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The Demon that grips me

— Calliope, Mar 12, 2008

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Region, Country: New York, USA

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bayoujeanette

18 years 3 months ago

Good poem

I like this one also. It is deep and dark. Reminds me of being physic. Fighting with unwanted spirits that physics attract. Thanks, Jeanette
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Tragic_Bliss

18 years 3 months ago

reminds

me of a person struggling with an inner spirit. $DEY KNOW$
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pinksheep

18 years 2 months ago

The First Eight Lines

Sheer genious the impact these lines had on me - dramatic- its' lyricism absolutely sublime-surely one day with lines like this you must be published, if this is not already ? yours extremely gratefully and sincerely ,les-may i thank you once more-may i thank you again-and again-
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professor

18 years ago

Those demons

Dont know why I had not read this one Lacy but i understand those demons of yours can be deceptively soothing in their quest to divest you of all control.I am glad your shadows won this time. All that appears loving is not kind. Your Proff
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pinksheep

18 years ago

Have

you changed this ?because i d'ont remember 'And I was consumed' for some reason I remember a line not as sparse as this ?
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Calliope

18 years ago

Yes,

i did change it but i liked it better the other way,was gonna worry about it another time, Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
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pinksheep

18 years ago

Lacy

Is 'close like lovers do' a line from a well known song-Regards, in other words have you robbed-

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