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Mar 13, 2008
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Thinking of you..............
Thinking of you, and your soft sweet lips.
It’s been a short time since we have been together,
But every time you come around, my heart skips, and I float like a feather.
When I’m with you the sun shines even through the worst weather.
I don’t know how my life could get any better.
One kiss, two kiss, three kiss, four,
I don’t think I can love you anymore then I do.
Wait, scratch that, Love is such a small word to describe how I feel.
You are what I would call, a “big deal”.
You’re smart, beautiful, and perfect for me.
My love for you is more vast then the entire world sea.
I like you, because you like me for being me.
When I look around you’re the only one I want to see.
It’s a rainy day when ever you’re not around.
When I look into your eyes, I see only the real you.
I can tell it was mint to be two.
Just me and you.
— Tragic_Bliss, Mar 13, 2008
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Mark
18 years 3 months ago
More than love?
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