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Thinking of you..............

Thinking of you, and your soft sweet lips. It’s been a short time since we have been together, But every time you come around, my heart skips, and I float like a feather. When I’m with you the sun shines even through the worst weather. I don’t know how my life could get any better. One kiss, two kiss, three kiss, four, I don’t think I can love you anymore then I do. Wait, scratch that, Love is such a small word to describe how I feel. You are what I would call, a “big deal”. You’re smart, beautiful, and perfect for me. My love for you is more vast then the entire world sea. I like you, because you like me for being me. When I look around you’re the only one I want to see. It’s a rainy day when ever you’re not around. When I look into your eyes, I see only the real you. I can tell it was mint to be two. Just me and you.
— Tragic_Bliss, Mar 13, 2008

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Country/Region: Idaho

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Mark

Mark

18 years 3 months ago

More than love?

Being in love lol Hi Magic, although your poem has a hallmark feel to it I like it and I think anybody who has every been "in love" can appreciate it. You might want to add some simile or go even deeper and use metaphore after all, she deserves it right? Truly, Mark

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