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Mar 28, 2008
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when we went out
not big fans of the game
but when we went out
only yesterday
to find a lamp
under which to examine
the blue star sapphire
i had just given you
i peered at your face
as you peered at the gem
ever so intently...
six points! you cried
your eyes ashine
touchdown
but when we went out
only yesterday
to find a lamp
under which to examine
the blue star sapphire
i had just given you
i peered at your face
as you peered at the gem
ever so intently...
six points! you cried
your eyes ashine
touchdown
— Rob Graber, Mar 28, 2008
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Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
Hi Rob,
Rob Graber
18 years 2 months ago
Well, the poem is not
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