A Long Love Poem

I like you girl;
better'n chicken,
better'n liking myself I reckon

more than any other thing alive;
more than life passing,
or the promise of time

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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Comments

Bonitaj

14 years ago

ah Moonman!

Loved the brevity of the piece and the bathos of the title!
A simple expression from a complex man - as is reflected in the last three lines!! Cowboys don't cry, they just tell it like it is! ;)
cheers
Boni

themoonman

13 years 12 months ago

Hi Boni ...

not so complex, at least my kids don't think so!

ahhh, that's another story

thanks

Richard

Kailashana2

14 years ago

Thank you for the poem

Thank you for the poem Richard and thank you for the perfect comment Boni, much enjoyed both.

themoonman

13 years 12 months ago

Anna ...

a tip of the brim to ya

weirdelf

14 years ago

Best love poem I've read in a long time.

Just a strange glitch happening.
On my screen
I like you girl
reads as
I like you girt

very weird, if it happens on other things you might want to check for code in your post. Remember always post from a .txt file is best or maybe you put in ; instad of a comma. Makes a big difference.[chuckles]