A Long Love Poem

I like you girl;
better'n chicken,
better'n liking myself I reckon

more than any other thing alive;
more than life passing,
or the promise of time

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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Comments

Bonitaj

14 years 3 months ago

ah Moonman!

Loved the brevity of the piece and the bathos of the title!
A simple expression from a complex man - as is reflected in the last three lines!! Cowboys don't cry, they just tell it like it is! ;)
cheers
Boni

themoonman

14 years 3 months ago

Hi Boni ...

not so complex, at least my kids don't think so!

ahhh, that's another story

thanks

Richard

Kailashana2

14 years 3 months ago

Thank you for the poem

Thank you for the poem Richard and thank you for the perfect comment Boni, much enjoyed both.

themoonman

14 years 3 months ago

Anna ...

a tip of the brim to ya

weirdelf

14 years 3 months ago

Best love poem I've read in a long time.

Just a strange glitch happening.
On my screen
I like you girl
reads as
I like you girt

very weird, if it happens on other things you might want to check for code in your post. Remember always post from a .txt file is best or maybe you put in ; instad of a comma. Makes a big difference.[chuckles]

themoonman

14 years 3 months ago