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Michael Landau

Mar 29, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Concession

I cameI sawI had my sayBut, no one listenedSo, now I'll go away!

— Michael Landau, Mar 29, 2008

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18 years 2 months ago

Life is like that sometime

Barbara Writes

I go away,come back again with more to say lol

it's the love that won't stay away.

17 years 9 months ago

Nicely done

Smiles:) Barbara well written enjoyed reading even more this time

ML

17 years 9 months ago

Thanks Barbara!

Thanks Barbara! I set all my poems to "members only", so I'm glad that you like the old stuff because unfortunately, the way things are set up you are going to see it one more time! I'm glad that the reaction to this visit to the past has been positive! Sincerely, Michael

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