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Michael Landau
Apr 07, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Freedom

Freedom!Oh, wonderful way!If you give them the voteWhat will they say? Now, I knowTo my dismayThey just votedTheir freedom away! So what's the pointOf having freedom?We broke their chainsBut, now they need them!
— Michael Landau, Apr 07, 2008
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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 2 months ago

Freedom

Great write, Michael. Now if we could just get more people to realize what their vote really gets them! Ronda
professor

professor

18 years 2 months ago

Fredom to make mistakes

So true of course but freedom is also about being able to make your own mistakes and hopefully learn from them. With the chains you only learn to accept or fight their constraints. Some of course will never learn and that is the potential price to be paid for freedom. But education rather than chains just has to be the way. Loved the poem. Keith

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