Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Apr 13, 2008
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
vague
unformed and anonymous
urgently pinched in waves of finned dispersion
a distant face streaming slowly apart
in the slumping waves of a forgotten pond
a thin river
dry Ophelia, unsure where to fade
carrying bouqets neither real nor artificial
symbiotic petals
christening a sleeping sea with
clear blushes even you don't understand
dry as the brush you were painted with
still not knowing as your sharp cheeks strike the
canvas
my dry Ophelia
— Quillsvein1, Apr 13, 2008
Share this poem
Critiques
RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
Ophelia
barbsdad2003
18 years 1 month ago
Alas! I'm sadly uninformed ...
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
Hello
purplemoondoll
18 years 1 month ago
symbiotic petals christening
weirdelf
18 years ago
ganging up on you here.
Join Neopoet to leave a critique
Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.