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hourglass love


my doltish "[l]ove [can be so]
like an hourglass
[that! then sits aright upon
its ample ass],

with the heart filling up [still]
as the brain[,
so like the typic, common
pouring drain,

it wholly] empties."
                                       ---Renard

yet so love prevails;
in fact, it truly never fails ...

to twine, to coil---to
interweave, to closely mesh---

its sticky fingers
where it greedy lingers,

digits so! wrapped round
both heart and soul ...

like crappy little tempties.

(herebelow lies, methinks,
an apt codicil to this beast
of a piece:

"[l]ove[,] like a war[,
comes] easy to begin
but very hard to stop."

                              ---H.L. Mencken

"[t]he only victory
over love [be] flight."

                           ---N. Bonaparte)
— barbsdad2003, Apr 17, 2008

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 1 month ago

(Say hello to Buster)

Complicated with simple greedy tendrils that not only cling, but feed. An apt codicil indeed... You have not only entertained and educated with this piece, you have given me food for thought! Always, Cat
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Quillsvein1

18 years 1 month ago

Extremely

literary, I love the quotes (particularly from Bonaparte) and one exciting pastiche of poems and historical commentary that ends in a quite accurate commentary on one of life's most complicated emotions. this was something.

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