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Apr 17, 2008
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Haiku - snooze beneath landscapes
Haiku - snooze beneath landscapes
Look becoming wiped –
wind blows stardust from the sky
straight to the eyelash!
Look becoming wiped –
wind blows stardust from the sky
straight to the eyelash!
— Marius Surleac, Apr 17, 2008
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purplemoondoll
18 years 1 month ago
Welcome to the site
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
Thank you Kaz!
Alobar
18 years 1 month ago
A poem of awe at the
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
thanks
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
very descriptive and awe
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
thank you
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
what I love abut this is
Marius Surleac
17 years 11 months ago
thank you Jess
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