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Bonds that bring Magic

It was the magic veil of fate that made our life paths cross ever so happily,

but it is what bonds us so strongly together that makes us live so very lovingly.

We trust each other: We share each other's secrets easily, candidly and openly,

we love each other in our own, very special way; we adore each other ever so amorously.


We care for each other: whether when she cares about his "special problem" with deep concern;

or whether when he strives to help with any of her problems, even when they're so difficult to discern.

We ever so often sacrifice for each other without a second thought, it just give us pleasure

It's part of our love, its part of our friendship, its part of our caring, it's something we treasure.

Valuing honesty above every other meaning, being always candid to each other,

we are always truthful, open and frank  even when it might hurt our relationship in some manner.

We both believe that whatever difficulties the magic veil of fate might ever bring along our way

we will both keep our special friendship growing forever and ever and in every possible way !!!

We are both at a very special, common intellectual level that sets us apart,

we are both scientists, we think practically and we both have our profession deep in our heart.

Our intellectual levels may be at the same level but they are also superlatively complimentary;

he knows more about business and politics. She knows more about the arts, she is more literary

but most of all we are both romantic, sentimentalists, sensitive individuals  

and lately we are foraying into poetry and writing; we both like to think of ourselves like intellectuals.

We both strive to finish our work in a productive, quick but perfect manner led by a hand of divine force.

We both try to listen to each other's thoughts, and whenever possible try to change course.

We both reveal our passions and manage to disclose every single little aspect of these same emotions

 that lead to improvement and enhancement if not to the very actual solutions.

We are both perfectionists but know that we have a long way to go through excellence,

we are egoists but put it all aside when we have to resolve issues in a satisfying sense.

We are spiritually motivated…  we are driven… we are ambitious… we are determined…

but at the same time we are compassionate for others... we care...  we are always concerned…

We know of all our faults and try to resolve them in a humble, modest way

we know we're only humans and that God will guide us in his own, special way 
— dsaranti, Apr 18, 2008

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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 1 month ago

Prose

While much of this is well-written, its form suggests prose rather than poetry. More specifically, it reads like a letter. There are many pieces here that could work into poetry. It would take serious editing and the willingness to change the format, making it more appealing to the general reader. As it stands, it seems as if it would appeal most to the person intended to receive it. NeoPoet has a wonderful mentorship program. This may be something you wish to consider in addition to the community poetry workshop. You have talent. I'd love to see it explored more thoroughly. Respectfully, Ronda

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