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I don't know...

 Is it destiny?

Is it fate?

Is it God’s will?

Is it all predetermined?

What shapes the exact path of our lives?

No, I trust that its man’s iron will,

its man’s strong drive and his determination,

its man's love, emotions and his passions,

his inner feelings, his happiness and his sadness,

its mans pursuit of his dreams and his visions

that makes all the special, distinctive difference.

Its faith in God’s helping hand that always encourages and guides us…

But, no, its faith in our own selves that drives our very own path in life…

Or do we walk a predestined path marked by the hand of God? I don’t know…


— dsaranti, Apr 19, 2008

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DarkinAZ

18 years 1 month ago

What is life?

That is the infinite question, which we all seek the answer to... "Seek and you shall find" Sincerely, Mark
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dsaranti

18 years 1 month ago

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Thank you for your comment again... Dimitri Sarantis
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Mark

18 years 1 month ago

I'm of the belief

for what it is worth that emotions make the world go round. The decisions we make on our choices are emotion driven. On a personal note is also a believe that God gives us those emotions to include Desire, Love, Sadnesss, the whole boatload - man, makes life interesting huh? But that is this earth :) A provocative write here could go on .... Mark
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dsaranti

18 years 1 month ago

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I totally agree with you. By emotions I had more in mind materialistic aspects like drive, determination, ambition. I should have definitely included emotions love, passion, mood swings more along your lines. Perhaps I should edit it. What do you think?? Dimitri Sarantis
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Mark

18 years 1 month ago

Oh Oh

I like it ! Nice ! I hope it is where you really wanted to go with it but I like it! Mark

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