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Apr 19, 2008
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I don't know...
Is it destiny?
Is it fate?
Is it God’s will?
Is it all predetermined?
What shapes the exact path of our lives?
No, I trust that its man’s iron will,
its man’s strong drive and his determination,
its man's love, emotions and his passions,
his inner feelings, his happiness and his sadness,
its mans pursuit of his dreams and his visions
that makes all the special, distinctive difference.
Its faith in God’s helping hand that always encourages and guides us…
But, no, its faith in our own selves that drives our very own path in life…
Or do we walk a predestined path marked by the hand of God? I don’t know…
— dsaranti, Apr 19, 2008
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DarkinAZ
18 years 1 month ago
What is life?
dsaranti
18 years 1 month ago
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Mark
18 years 1 month ago
I'm of the belief
dsaranti
18 years 1 month ago
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Mark
18 years 1 month ago
Oh Oh
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