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Michael Landau
Apr 20, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tomorrow Will Be Different Than Today

Every dayI hope and prayTomorrow will be differentThan today Yet every day remains the sameAnd I know whom to blame Why can't I break free?The only one to blame is me Every day I knowI'll try, and then let go A soul, and mind derangedA life that's never changed My mind will not be stillUntil I find the will
— Michael Landau, Apr 20, 2008
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MeanderS

18 years 1 month ago

like it very much..its so

like it very much..its so true to everybody..u jus spoke my mind..wel! dat's why the poet is there for, stands for everybody. really nice..but i think you jus found the 'will', you wished for that change. al da best!
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

Michael

We are always the hardest on ourselves aren't we a couple of suggestions please what if you tried Tomorrow will be different than today (drop the it is) would that work there then perhaps And I know whom I should blame merely suggestions bottom line is you are the author Chrys
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Michael Landau

18 years 1 month ago

Thanks Chrys!

Thanks for your suggestions! After thinking it over, I decided that you are right! It does sound better that way! Michael
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

michael

you are welcome! thanks for using the suggestions Chrys
Nilmini

Nilmini

18 years 1 month ago

Perfect

Perfect again Michael, But it's so unfair! why do you happen to talk my mind out? (just joking) Thanks, I learn a lot by reading your poems. Nilmini
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years 1 month ago

Perfect

Smiles:) Barbara Today a bore Tomorrow excitement It's up to me I like this you, really did a good job relating.
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Michael Landau

18 years 1 month ago

Thanks Barbara!

I'm glad you like it! I only wish making it happen was as easy as writing it down on paper. Writing about it is one thing, making it happen is something else. Michael
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 9 months ago

I agree

Smiles:) Barbara I can say ya to that. easy to write hard to make happen. i fail each day, but make the best of it anyway

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