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IKnowNoBox
Apr 21, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Peregrine*

falcon
high in clear sky
swooping, gliding, diving
awesome aerial acrobat
beauty
— IKnowNoBox, Apr 21, 2008

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years 1 month ago

Beautiful sight

Smiles:) Barbara A falcon flying in mid air, making backward flips in the skies. Just beautiful
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 1 month ago

Thank you Barbara and Richard

This won me second place in a 7th grade school district contest,the first place winner was from my class, he entered the class example Cinquin, some how the teacher failed to notice. I contributed the first two lines to that one(it was about a rainbow).So I guess you could say I took second place to my team player. mescioto hawks and dragon flies, and the way they get there meals is a awesome display of natures wonders. In ink, Dabbler
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 1 month ago

Well then..

I am a fan of the raptors awesome grace as well. The red-tailed hawk is my personal fav. they are seen here frequently. now you have me soaring. Richard
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barbsdad2003

18 years 1 month ago

Great meter ...

and beautiful imagery. Methinks you showcase well here your magic touch. (Nice switch of subject at last line, from bird to self.) Thanx, Chuck PS: "A fly can't bird, but a bird can fly." ---Milne
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 1 month ago

Thank you Chuck

I have dug around deep in my brain to bring this back to a page again. In ink, Dabbler

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