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Calliope
Apr 30, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Midnight Princess Part II

I feel the pull
of your soul to mine
as you reach out to hold me
with your mind.
You feel the nudge
of my seeking spirit
I whisper soft words
and I know you hear it.
My heart sighs deeply
with your reply
As together
my Midnight Prince and I fly
on towards the moon
the stars so bright
lighting the way
for our midnight flight.
— Calliope, Apr 30, 2008

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

18 years 1 month ago

Midnight

Beautifully written, smooth and flows well you lifted me up!
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Calliope

18 years 1 month ago

Thank you both

I still think it needs some tweeking or perhaps another verse or two,or maybe i'll leave it alone ,who knows,lol.I guess we'll all have to see,lol. Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
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DarkinAZ

18 years 1 month ago

Me Likey,

I love this poem! It reminds me of a beautiful dream. Sincerely, Mark
C

Calliope

18 years 1 month ago

Thank you both

for your comments.your very kind.I wasn't sure about the response i'd get on this one,wasn't too sure if i was done with it,still not, but it seems to be ok,lol. Thanks, Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 1 month ago

Hi Lacy

significantly simple and impressively enjoyable! Always, Cat
professor

professor

18 years 1 month ago

It's a lovely start Lacy

and with a soft and compelling tone. But i think you know it feels unfinished and there is surely more to come... so i look forward to its completion Just a small point i think it should be: "and I know you hear them". (plural if it is refering to "words") Your Proff

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