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Apr 30, 2008
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A Cure
Tranquility succeeds to engulf me
In soul, mind and heart.
To the ends, beginning,
mend the old roads
Old tracks
The ravens pick the dead scavengers They lack humanity
As a war of mans insanity reignsBut still though these cold darts,
somehowWarmth creeps into my heart.I feel a light around my plight
My eyes see the pain,
I refrighn from botherI cannot care more for their fodderMy care I’ve wasted to many years on their careless mistakes and fears I found my way out of their catastropheI used the only drug thats freeA secret to my sanity rafting on tranquility
The cure
Laughter
In soul, mind and heart.
To the ends, beginning,
mend the old roads
Old tracks
The ravens pick the dead scavengers They lack humanity
As a war of mans insanity reignsBut still though these cold darts,
somehowWarmth creeps into my heart.I feel a light around my plight
My eyes see the pain,
I refrighn from botherI cannot care more for their fodderMy care I’ve wasted to many years on their careless mistakes and fears I found my way out of their catastropheI used the only drug thats freeA secret to my sanity rafting on tranquility
The cure
Laughter
— Xenia, Apr 30, 2008
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Xenia
18 years 1 month ago
pLEASE FORGIVE THE
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
Hi Xenia
dsaranti
18 years 1 month ago
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Xenia
18 years 1 month ago
sorry didnt work
dsaranti
18 years 1 month ago
Help
poewriter58
18 years ago
Xenia
poewriter58
18 years ago
Xenia
weirdelf
18 years ago
no
Xenia
18 years ago
I dont disagree but...
poewriter58
18 years ago
xenia
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