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Apr 30, 2008
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My second Love letter to Elaine
My Elaine,I love you just so much, you love me just the sameElaine, our love is an everlasting flame...You're tender as a spring flower, beautiful as a crimson rose. Elaine, your wonderful blue eyes sparkle, Elaine your beauty just glows. You left for five lingering daysfive grim and arduous days in many, many ways.You asked me not to contact you in any way, in any case and I understood your reasons, I knew my place.We are secret lovers after all...How would I do without YOU ever so close to my soul,without exchanging even one tender word of sweet, delicate careeven one message, one little sign of love, a little tenderness to share.Yet I knew that during this time of toil and strain our hearts would beat together,our minds and thoughts would simmer as close as ever, and our souls would be intimately, warmly bonded together ...You told me to reminisce of all our happy moments from days gone pastand it was pretty easy to bring them back to mind so very, very fast.It is indelible ink that marks all those treasured memories that forever last.I knew all that, I expected all thatand I knew I would have to live with this very trying, heartbreaking fact:Five days without any contact...I would manage it, I would survive it, I expected it all. Yet, every single day that passed along and would slowly crawlyou dared, you found the furtive way, you managed to show your love for me.Everyday, it was a very tiny little thing, but a tiny little thing that meant ever so much to meyou managed to secretly send me a little sign of tender care,a message sent deeply from your heart for me to share.Something just to simply say "I'm here, I'm in touch."Like when I told you I miss you so muchand you silently whispered, in real caution : "Yes, I do too".I was full of joy, my heart fluttered, it almost flew.It was a sign of caring, a message from you,and it was more than enough to pull me through. No one in my life has loved me as you doit's something I know deeply to be true,and, thus, I want to add a final touch againby saying that I love you so very much my dear Elaine! Dimitris
— dsaranti, Apr 30, 2008
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MeanderS
18 years 1 month ago
sweet
dsaranti
18 years 1 month ago
Thank you
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