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May 05, 2008
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Tanka - dizziness
Tanka - dizziness
Sun hiding through clouds…
dismantled scream of the wind
invoking the rain;
my eyes sensing the morphine
under the kiss of the night
Sun hiding through clouds…
dismantled scream of the wind
invoking the rain;
my eyes sensing the morphine
under the kiss of the night
— Marius Surleac, May 05, 2008
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weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
Beautifully expressed,
Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
Thank you Jess!
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