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A "very special" friendship,,,,

They were the most special friends.
He cared for her ever so much,she cared for him ever so dearly too.There were so many problems as such.She had a boyfriend, he knew.He, on his part, was married so very much.There were many more problems and just to name a fewshe would move to a far away land, so out of touchand he was double her age, they both knew.It seems fate hadn't favored them so much,and it looked like a dead end; it was nothing new.
But there was trust, there was care, there was so much worship,
they were like one, they were soul mates, they wouldn't let any hardship,any hardship in all the world ruin such a very precious friendship.
Too much was at stake for such closeness to end haplessly,
there was too much love, they should struggle to keep their relation endlessly.They thought and thought although it looked hopeless,so they decided to accept fate but to be fearless.
They would fight and fight with all their mighty vigor
they would keep their friendship alive in all its beauty and all its splendor.They promised to always keep in daily  touchand to try and keep their love and friendship forever new.The odds were against them, they knew, but they were both fighters.
They hoped and dreamed… They were determined...   
— dsaranti, May 05, 2008

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 1 month ago

Hello

It just goes to show that all lovers have their special problems. I think this poem is a good start and would like to see it developed into a longer piece. Always, Cat
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dsaranti

18 years 1 month ago

Replying

Thank you for your input. I gave it a try at expanding it a little. Please take alook! Your friend Dimitri
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Rolwright

18 years 1 month ago

Good writing

If only we all were as strong willed and determined.
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dsaranti

18 years 1 month ago

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Yes, we'll give it a shot and try as hard as we can. Only time will tell. Your friend Dimitri

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