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May 05, 2008
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A "very special" friendship,,,,
They were the most special friends.
He cared for her ever so much,she cared for him ever so dearly too.There were so many problems as such.She had a boyfriend, he knew.He, on his part, was married so very much.There were many more problems and just to name a fewshe would move to a far away land, so out of touchand he was double her age, they both knew.It seems fate hadn't favored them so much,and it looked like a dead end; it was nothing new.
But there was trust, there was care, there was so much worship,
they were like one, they were soul mates, they wouldn't let any hardship,any hardship in all the world ruin such a very precious friendship.
Too much was at stake for such closeness to end haplessly,
there was too much love, they should struggle to keep their relation endlessly.They thought and thought although it looked hopeless,so they decided to accept fate but to be fearless.
They would fight and fight with all their mighty vigor
they would keep their friendship alive in all its beauty and all its splendor.They promised to always keep in daily touchand to try and keep their love and friendship forever new.The odds were against them, they knew, but they were both fighters.
They hoped and dreamed… They were determined...
He cared for her ever so much,she cared for him ever so dearly too.There were so many problems as such.She had a boyfriend, he knew.He, on his part, was married so very much.There were many more problems and just to name a fewshe would move to a far away land, so out of touchand he was double her age, they both knew.It seems fate hadn't favored them so much,and it looked like a dead end; it was nothing new.
But there was trust, there was care, there was so much worship,
they were like one, they were soul mates, they wouldn't let any hardship,any hardship in all the world ruin such a very precious friendship.
Too much was at stake for such closeness to end haplessly,
there was too much love, they should struggle to keep their relation endlessly.They thought and thought although it looked hopeless,so they decided to accept fate but to be fearless.
They would fight and fight with all their mighty vigor
they would keep their friendship alive in all its beauty and all its splendor.They promised to always keep in daily touchand to try and keep their love and friendship forever new.The odds were against them, they knew, but they were both fighters.
They hoped and dreamed… They were determined...
— dsaranti, May 05, 2008
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