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Alobar
May 05, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Constipated

Lo, I seek
A remedy for the
Xeric state of my
Artistry,
The
Insufferable
Vacuousness of my
Every attempt at poetry.






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— Alobar, May 05, 2008

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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

alobar

amusing yes as a rule though an acrostic incorporates the title ah but there is always something to write about Chrys
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Alobar

18 years 1 month ago

Normally that is the rule,

Normally that is the rule, but I thought a cure to the title would be an acceptable conceit. Alobar (Just my two cents, spend them on gum if you wish.)
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 1 month ago

Alobar

Enjoyed the acrostic, but I'm hoping that your condition of writer's block is very short lived. Always, Cat p.s. your pic... Is that a pic of Don Quixote, perchance? I like it very much!
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Alobar

18 years 1 month ago

So to do I. I often write

So to do I. I often write acrostics to jump-start things, as it were. I don't normally subscribe to them as good poetry, but I thought this one worked as comic verse. Yes, Don Quixotic, a hero of all poets I would assume, for how more quixotic can a person's pursuits be than to write poetry?!! Alobar (Just my two cents, spend them on gum if you wish.)
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

18 years 1 month ago

lol

And amuse it did. It's amazing how we can twist even the most basic of subjects into works of art. ~Lynn (Jess K.) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Bush is listening.... use big words!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine..."
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Alobar

18 years 1 month ago

Poem’s purpose was two

Poem's purpose was two fold: to amuse and to get my pen flowing again. So far it has at least served to amuse.... Alobar (Just my two cents, spend them on gum if you wish.)

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