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Just tree (3) days,,,

Just three days. that’s how long it would last. His trip would last just three days. His trip to the far away land where his beloved Elaine had now moved. Three days of a lifetime, a drop in the ocean, an instant in the passage of the endless eternity. A trip to the other end of the earth so far, far away. He was expecting this trip so much he had waited so many months to see her for just three days. They cared for each other they cared so very much, they missed each other even more. They were friends for life, they never stopped thinking of each other, longing for each other. They waited and they waited for these three days. It was what kept them going. Their friendship, their pure love; their hearts pounding together, their souls eternally bonded, their minds thinking of each other, constantly, incessantly. What kept them together was  their eternal love and friendship and waiting to meet again. Even for just three days, even for a tiny star, a tiny star in the universe, the never-ending universe. They were in touch every day even from so far away and the time had come for them to be together again after such along time for just three days… Three days of their lives…   
— dsaranti, May 07, 2008

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years ago

Nice poem

Smiles:) Barbara some space between making stanza would be good. spelling error in title. the number 3 in in the title is not necessary. it's a distraction. good image and it flowed well

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