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May 21, 2008
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Nightmares
I close my eyes
the nightmare begins
thousand year oaks
awaken.
Drifting away
in this spiritual wake
each epileptic flash
reveals a petrified face.
Wise men, witch's
and fairies
riding on the backs
of fallen leaves.
Bearded elders
reclaiming the past
with crescent moon eyes
and skin made of ash.
This is the place
where the dead live again
and the chants of the dying
turn trees into men.
the nightmare begins
thousand year oaks
awaken.
Drifting away
in this spiritual wake
each epileptic flash
reveals a petrified face.
Wise men, witch's
and fairies
riding on the backs
of fallen leaves.
Bearded elders
reclaiming the past
with crescent moon eyes
and skin made of ash.
This is the place
where the dead live again
and the chants of the dying
turn trees into men.
— DarkinAZ, May 21, 2008
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Critiques
Marius Surleac
18 years ago
interesting...
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Thank you
poewriter58
18 years ago
Mark
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Not really,
Calliope
18 years ago
Hey Mark,
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Thanks!
Calliope
18 years ago
LOL!
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Thank you
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
nightmare
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Thank you!
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Smiles:) Barbara
infinite_dwarf
18 years ago
nice
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
LoL, Just because...
infinite_dwarf
18 years ago
I aim to please
leonard daranjo
18 years ago
Great imagery. The first
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Much Appreciated,
themoonman
18 years ago
wonderful images
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Thanks Richard
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