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Marius Surleac
Marius Surleac
May 21, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Spring’s beautiful virus


Flowers caught by the eye –
sun scatters his arrows
in the heart of trees;
and leave in my body,
a forceful disease
— Marius Surleac, May 21, 2008

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Region, Country: Romania, ROU

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themoonman

themoonman

18 years ago

Hi Marius...

I get the fever too... love the short and strength of this... the title drew me in...and it fits so well... Richard
Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

18 years ago

thank you both...

Thank you both: Richard and Calliope for your beautiful words and I'm glad that you liked it. I have written it when my body was filled with inner peace, because of the spring's beauties and fragrance
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pinksheep

18 years ago

It

suggests something more powerful to me than inner peace, i think it is extremely clever this poem, it strikes the psyche with chords dissonant and yet at the same time melodic, bringing the reader me into a state of blissful confusion-
Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

18 years ago

you're right...

Yes, you are right - first I have described a biological phenomenon (photosynthesis) and then I made the connection beyond this scene of real life phenomenon, with my own being, with my own sensations. Thank you very much for your kind comment! Marius
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pinksheep

18 years ago

Marius

So much thought went into this poem, your explanation has made me even more happily perplexed, you have taken me into a sublime blizzard of great dizziness and joy-sincerest regards

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