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May 23, 2008
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Life....
A warm winter's day, I sit and dream away
the past, the present...the future
what will become of my life now?
Who will share it with me?
I need to discover a new path
where will my destiny lead me?
A truck slows down in the distance
a horn sounds from afar,
Everyone seems to be going somewhere
to their destination.
Here I sit..stationary...motionless..without purpose
My cat looks frustrated, I wonder...
could she be feeling like me
or maybe she's just hungry.
The sun disappears behind a fluffy white cloud
every now and then I feel the warmth of the sun.
I could sleep here...
soothing hum of traffic
Sunshine makes me warm inside
Close my eyes....relax....Life!
the past, the present...the future
what will become of my life now?
Who will share it with me?
I need to discover a new path
where will my destiny lead me?
A truck slows down in the distance
a horn sounds from afar,
Everyone seems to be going somewhere
to their destination.
Here I sit..stationary...motionless..without purpose
My cat looks frustrated, I wonder...
could she be feeling like me
or maybe she's just hungry.
The sun disappears behind a fluffy white cloud
every now and then I feel the warmth of the sun.
I could sleep here...
soothing hum of traffic
Sunshine makes me warm inside
Close my eyes....relax....Life!
— MEL, May 23, 2008
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infinite_dwarf
18 years ago
Mel
wolfycat
18 years ago
I like when...
themoonman
18 years ago
Hi Mel...
MEL
18 years ago
Thankyou
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