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May 28, 2008
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Artistic Imagination
Artistically brushed are puffs of velvet tufts,Melded of shimmering starlets, like jewels toa serene canvassed sky,Simplistic strokes give play to silken treesOffering shelter, to night owls looking downOn you and me, By suggestive touch, catkins, defuse silver Light,bellowing through thoughts of moon lit trees,Flickering of opal white, drenched like tears,splashing to streams of serenic blues and greens, And magically and so cleverly, a little is left,to where; thine eyes are laid to rest,Calmed by drifting mists, of imaginary thoughts,that this tranquil piece, allows you to be,
Peter
Peter
— rider68, May 28, 2008
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Critiques
Calliope
18 years ago
Stunning!
rider68
18 years ago
Stunning!
Janice Pearce
18 years ago
Artistic Imagination
rider68
18 years ago
Artistic Imagination
poewriter58
18 years ago
Peter
rider68
18 years ago
Hi Chrys
pinksheep
18 years ago
This
rider68
18 years ago
Fragrance so stirring
Rett
18 years ago
Fantabulous
rider68
18 years ago
Hi Rett
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Beautiful choice of words
rider68
18 years ago
Thank You Mark
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Many words
rider68
18 years ago
I Am Sad. That you cannot see.
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Congradulation
rider68
18 years ago
Thanks Barbara
infinite_dwarf
18 years ago
Peter
rider68
18 years ago
Jess Big Thanks
poewriter58
18 years ago
Peter
rider68
18 years ago
Thanks Chrys
weirdelf
18 years ago
It seems no-one else got the joke.
Cynthia Henson
18 years ago
Nice write
rider68
18 years ago
Hi cindy and Welcome
rider68
18 years ago
It seems no-one else got the joke.
Synchro
18 years ago
beautiful words.....but
rider68
18 years ago
beautiful words.....but
themoonman
18 years ago
Hi Peter...
rider68
18 years ago
Hi My Friend
Sean
18 years ago
Congrats on the spotlight,
rider68
18 years ago
Congrats on the spotlight,
Synchro
18 years ago
"Cheap snipes" ?????
rider68
18 years ago
"Cheap snipes" ?????
Basil Hallward
18 years ago
Just wanted to say
rider68
18 years ago
Just wanted to say
LadyTheresa
56 years 5 months ago
Peter
rider68
18 years ago
A Humble Thank You.
Synchro
18 years ago
No, it was not a personal interpretation
RSScheerer
18 years ago
Gentlemen
rider68
18 years ago
Hi Ronda
RSScheerer
18 years ago
You are welcome, Peter
weirdelf
18 years ago
I never said how much I like this, Peter
rider68
18 years ago
Hi Jess
weirdelf
18 years ago
well hey, I'm no poetic slut! I don't give compliments lightly
Ms.Renee87
18 years ago
Excellent
rider68
18 years ago
Excellent.......This is a true master piece
LadyTheresa
56 years 5 months ago
Peter
rider68
18 years ago
Thanks Lady T
themoonman
18 years ago
Peter...
rider68
18 years ago
Hi Richard
weirdelf
18 years ago
Sorry to push the point,
rider68
18 years ago
Thanks Jess
weirdelf
18 years ago
Really, truly giggling out loud
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Peter
weirdelf
18 years ago
Nah Barb (my sister Barbara hates being called Barb)
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Hey Jess
weirdelf
18 years ago
How about Autistic Imagination?
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Maybe
Jonathan Moore
18 years ago
Point of reference
rider68
18 years ago
Hi Jonathan...
stavroula
18 years ago
wow
rider68
18 years ago
Hi & Welcome Stavroula
leonard daranjo
18 years ago
Hi Peter
rider68
18 years ago
Hi Leonard
purplemoondoll
18 years ago
Breathtaking imagery, truly
rider68
18 years ago
Breathtaking imagery,
rider68
17 years 12 months ago
To Synchro
Synchro
17 years 12 months ago
Thank you, too, Peter
RSScheerer
17 years 12 months ago
Group hug!!!
rider68
17 years 12 months ago
Thanks Ronda
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