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A dream come true...

He loved her beautiful,

sparkling blue eyes.

He loved her so very pretty face,

he loved her velvet soft lips

and he loved her wonderful body.

 

He admired her intelligence

her persistence, her strong drive.

 

He adored her inner soul,

her kindness, her gentle care

her maturity and her judgment.

 

But most of all he venerated

her romantic spirit

her spirited dreaming

her thirst for life.   
— dsaranti, May 30, 2008

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Majeedahs_Umi

18 years ago

Question?

are theses poems about the same peson? almost seems like the same poem in a way just a different twist be blessed, brandi

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