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May 30, 2008
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A dream come true...
He loved her beautiful,
sparkling blue eyes.
He loved her so very pretty face,
he loved her velvet soft lips
and he loved her wonderful body.
He admired her intelligence
her persistence, her strong drive.
He adored her inner soul,
her kindness, her gentle care
her maturity and her judgment.
But most of all he venerated
her romantic spirit
her spirited dreaming
her thirst for life.— dsaranti, May 30, 2008
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