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How they fell in love: a true story
The door bell rang
she walked in
and they both
sat at the table.
They had work to do,
lots of work…
It would take several months.
She returned again and again
and every time she returned
he found her prettier and prettier.
She had the most beautiful face
the most delicate characteristics
and she had blue, amazing, sparkling eyes.
Her smile illuminated the whole room,
she was radiant, magically glowing.
She was stunning,
she was breathtakingly beautiful.
And every time she returned
he found her smarter and smarter.
She was brilliant, she was witty
she was driven, she was ambitious.
She had maturity, she had judgment,
she was spirited,
her sense of humor was as sharp as a razor.
They exchanged numerous
business messages every day
day after day, after day…
And then one fine sunny day,
a day that fate brought,
the business message
she sent was different.
It was very different…
The message contained a line about
how beautiful the moon would be that night.He replied about the beauty of the moon
and pretty soon
one thing led to another and
the business messages had turned
into passionate romantic exchanges.
He wrote her a beautiful poem.
He said how he had travelled all his life
searching in vain for his true love
only to finally find true love and care in her.
She immediately replied marveling at his poem.
She had tears in her eyes…
She said she had also travelled all her life
only to find her true love in him.
In each other they finally found love, care,
friendship, trust and support.
But most of all they discovered that they shared
the most beautiful, pure romantic sensitivities...
They had developed
a unique love relationshiponly for them to share…
Only the magic hand of fate
could separate them from now on…
Critiques
Majeedahs_Umi
18 years ago
interesting
stavroula
18 years ago
very interesting. and
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