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Haikus

A Cat's Whiskers (Dedicated to a pet cat named Treasure)

arabesques of light
spouted through perforations
quiver silently

A Spider's Meditation

skeins of silken thread
euclidean arabesque
a perfect crochet

Nocturne

silhouettes of life
inked against the horizon
a balmy stillness


Pilgrim Ants

reverential ants
Greet the ones on their return
From a pilgrimage

Inner Harmony

impeccably tuned
strings of a violin
bowed to perfection

Sea's Assignation

the sea kissed the clouds
an impressionist's brush
smudged the horizon 

 
— leonard daranjo, Jun 02, 2008

Critiques

RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years ago

Haiku

These are very nicely written; perfect Haiku form. I especially like "A Spider's Meditation." Best, Ronda

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