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Internet Friend

Internet friend
Where are you?
In a far off land
Across the blue

Are you healthy?
Do you thrive?
Sometimes I wonder
If you're still alive

On your island
Across the sea
Do you ever stop
And think of me?

In your country
So full of death
I hope I'm not the only friend
That you've got left!

— Michael Landau, Jun 02, 2008

Critiques

Nilmini

Nilmini

18 years ago

WOW

Oh, how wonderful it is to know that some one is thinking about you in a far far away land! Perfect ideas put together in perfect way! I've no more to say. Thanks.
Nilmini

Nilmini

17 years 9 months ago

Hi Michael

I'm sorry I didn't keep a copy of the original. What were the Changes you made? Surely, the last lines. Best Regards.
ML

Michael Landau

17 years 9 months ago

I did not make any changes

Yesterday, I set all my poems to members-only. When I did so, the website interpreted the switch to members-only as an update. Nothing has been updated. No change has been made. Sincerely, Michael

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