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Jun 02, 2008
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Blend of a Rainbow
A beauty unmatchedRadiant glowShe walks, long legsLights go outWhispers grow The splendor she possesses like a weapon unleashedCaptures the souls of men – leaves women down on their kneesSmile brightly shinning, makes you smile just to witnessDark eyes piercing like venom, lethal, deadly, so viciousThin and long she commands the attention of the roomLike a divine being she ascends to the light of the moon Beauty a feature desired and cravedBut cleverness, cunningness, poise also deserve praiseHer mind a treasure, just as her lightHer laugh her patience her bravery and might Cut her in halfPoke a hole through the centerWhat will leak out - the colors of the rainbowAll blended together
— stavroula, Jun 02, 2008
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RSScheerer
18 years ago
Stavroula
stavroula
18 years ago
thank you so much!
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years ago
whom ever this Lady is
Liamb
18 years ago
Inspired
stavroula
18 years ago
what i meant by the blending
Jacob
18 years ago
Incredible
stavroula
18 years ago
aw thanks so much Jacob your
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