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Sprigntime brings back life...

Springtime brings back life…   Springtime brings wonderful fragrances in the air. Fragrances that bring pleasure bring freshness, bring joy to everyone. Springtime brings blooming roses in all their glory filling gardens with all their colours in all their splendour, in all their might. Springtime brings beautiful

rolling meadows in stunning colours,

in red, yellow or white, offering a breathtaking, wonderful sight to anyone who takes the time to go out, relax and enjoy nature. Springtime brings back birds birds of all kinds small and big, black and white swallows or geese, wild ducks or sea birds from their faraway winter shelters. It’s the cycle of the seasons, the cycle of life. Springtime brings clear crispy skies and at the time of dusk it brings the most beautiful sunsets with their glorious, vivid, glowing colours. It gives us the opportunity to enjoy this unique, magical atmosphere this unique, imposing yet calming feeling only to be found at sunset.   Springtime brings back life…   Springtime brings love to people the most wonderful of all feelings. It makes them walk on the beach holding hands. It makes their hearts tingle it makes them dream. It makes them embrace kiss passionately and feel their hearts beat together. It gives them magic, enchanting feelings they had long forgotten. It makes them fly in the sky reach for the moon. And when they hold hands and look at that starlit sky it makes them pause and think pause and dream it makes them imagine, imagine of a better world. Springtime fills people with passion, a passion of desire, a quest for joy, a passion of love, a quest for vividness.   Springtime brings back life…   Springtime offers people the joy of life a hope for the future an overwhelming lust of optimism. It’s all in the air. Springtime brings power in the soul and gives strength to overcome obstacles.  

Springtime brings back life…

    
— dsaranti, Jun 03, 2008

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18 years ago

Aargh - I just deleted a

Aargh - I just deleted a rather lengthy comment. I was saying I thought this was a lovely theme that would be lovlier if you painted more pictures. That is, instead of telling us that there are glorious blooming flowers and vivid sunsets and lovers with tingling hearts, paint us specific scenes. Now, this last thing is nit-picky but it nags at me. Your theme is that spring causes things to return but then you say that it gives people feelings they've never had before. You can't bring back something that's never existed. I hope you'll rewrite a bit and repost.

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