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Jun 06, 2008
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An Oldster's Jeremiad: A Gaffer's Ranting Grouse to Turn the Tap On--En Route to Pigs and Whistles
An Oldster's Jeremiad: A Gaffer's
Ranting Grouse to Turn the Tap
On---En Route to Pigs and Whistles
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There just ain't no such thing
as social security, at least
not---ding, ding!---in America.
---barbsdad
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Social Security
Holds me well securely
In abject penury,
In gainless worry,
In uncommon fury,
And relative obscurity.
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America tenders sham promises
to too many young and old of
its citizens, but in particular to its
aged.
---barbsdad
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(Note: The quaintly vintage
expression pigs and whistles
appears somewhat soon after
piggybank, I think, in most
so-called unabridged English
dictionaries ... and perhaps
in one or two not quite so self-
toutedly unabridged.)
— barbsdad2003, Jun 06, 2008
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Critiques
Mark
18 years ago
Oh I don't know
infinite_dwarf
18 years ago
stands and cheers
themoonman
18 years ago
Hi Chuck...
purplemoondoll
18 years ago
Sharp political commentary
barbsdad2003
18 years ago
Thanx, guys
whitetea
18 years ago
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Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Social Security
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