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Kissing The Passing Time

kiss, goodnight, kiss

let this moment linger

your taste still on my lips.

let eternal felicity dwell

within our tender lips.

oh kiss, goodnight, kiss.

 

then pass, goodnight, pass

for in our sleep we run

into our own dream world;

then with the rising sun

we’re united in this world.

oh pass, goodnight, pass.

 

kiss, good-day, kiss.

as lovers we entwine and

fleeting moments we embrace;

with sun-kissed hair we stand

the whole world to embrace.

oh kiss, good-day, kiss.

 

then pass, good-day, pass.

in the evening twilight glow

our path lit by moon shine,

all the stars shall look below

at the way our love does shine.

oh pass. Good-day, pass.

 

let us kiss throughout all passing time


— Jacob, Jun 07, 2008

Critiques

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MEL

18 years ago

How lucious....

Mel Inwood You have just described LOVE again so well in this poem. I get the feeling you have really been in love, perhaps still are. It's beautiful to see and read...It really warms the soul, because I believe that there is nothing like a good PASH..hahahahahahaha,...kissing someone is so good! Nice Mel
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Jacob

18 years ago

Thanks

I like to think that I've been in love, I think once you've been in love you never stop being in love even if you part from your loved one, that love will always remain part of your heart never to be torn away again. And yes nothing is like kissing someone, and that feeling of not wanting it to end. Jacob

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