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Jun 07, 2008
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Kissing The Passing Time
kiss, goodnight, kiss
let this moment linger
your taste still on my lips.
let eternal felicity dwell
within our tender lips.
oh kiss, goodnight, kiss.
then pass, goodnight, pass
for in our sleep we run
into our own dream world;
then with the rising sun
we’re united in this world.
oh pass, goodnight, pass.
kiss, good-day, kiss.
as lovers we entwine and
fleeting moments we embrace;
with sun-kissed hair we stand
the whole world to embrace.
oh kiss, good-day, kiss.
then pass, good-day, pass.
in the evening twilight glow
our path lit by moon shine,
all the stars shall look below
at the way our love does shine.
oh pass. Good-day, pass.
let us kiss throughout all passing time
— Jacob, Jun 07, 2008
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Critiques
Kailashana
18 years ago
smiles… the eternal kiss
MEL
18 years ago
How lucious....
Jacob
18 years ago
Thanks
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